Unit 16 - Sound Effects - All foley sound effects created - On their own.
Astralite: A History - Final Draft/Completed Film. Sound effects/extra sound effects now all added.
Feedback: - https://forms.gle/rQ9NnvghrcPihCad7
Responses:
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Evaluation and Audience Feedback:
When creating the foley and sound effects for my documentary, I made sure that I had sufficient pre-production work in place including a Location Recce, Mindmap, and Recording Log where if any risks impacted my editing or recording further down the line I would be able to recover. My original idea for what my sound project would pair with was my Unit 14 - Radio production, however I struggled with the timing and logistics of what foley and sound effects I would be able to create, I therefore chose to use my Unit 5 - Short Film instead. My Unit 5 is a short historical motorsport documentary. This choice gave me more creative liberty and diversity in regards to what sound effects and foley I could create, the film would also be significantly longer than a radio production and therefore would give me more opportunities to input sound effects alongside the existing diegesis. I began recording my sound effects at home using my home microphone, laptop and the audio program Audacity. This was a better option than recording at UTC as I had access to a wider array of items/props to use for Foley work which meant I could have more divisiveness about the sound choices I made. I also didn't need to seek permission to access the recording studio (so I could record whenever possible.) I recorded multiple takes of each sound effect and played them alongside my documentary to check if they matched the existing audio. My foley work included someone coughing/clearing their throat, paper being shuffled, paper being stacked, and metal being dropped/ worked with. This all combined to make an efficient and effective post-production process.
The feedback I gained from my Google Form questionnaire suggests that the sounds used in my film made a noticeable different to the audience's experience/enjoyment of the film. Such as the music being suitable for the time period that the film is set in. However, in some areas I turned up the volume of the music to add more impact. The overwhelming majority also said that the sound effects I added were all necessary to the overall diegesis and they all added something. Sound effects I added in included paper rustling and coughing, again, the same with music I changed the audio mixer in areas so it sounded cleaner but not overpowering that it takes away from what the interview is about. People also noted that the sound effects matched the time of when it is set. Another thing I would change based on the feedback that I gained from my audience is that I would make time to record sounds of machines as someone stated in the feedback that I could have added motorcycle sound effects. The main reason for this is that I was worried that it would sound too loud and overpower the documentary, this means I could have also experimented more with foley sounds.
Something I would change or do differently compared to the path I took for this sound project would be having more respect for time management and planning documents that aided that such as a production schedule. This is because I discounted the time it would take to complete all of my pre-production documents and planning as well as how long it would take for recording and editing. This came particularly apparent up until my deadline for unit 5 where a big project took a similar amount of time to finish as the Unit 16 did which was supposed to only aid in its creation. Not adhering to an effective time schedule meant that some parts of my sound project took longer than they should have done and detracted my attention from the more important (and lengthier) parts of my project such as the time it would take to edit and evidence my editing alongside it. This ultimately resulted in my unit drawing too close to a deadline when it really shouldn't have. If my time management had been better and I had focused my attention on the more difficult parts of my unit I feel that some more advanced sound effects could have also been added, which would have elevated the quality of my documentary and created more immersion and escapism for audience members watching.
The foley effects that I created definitely enhanced my motorsport documentary due to the fact that they were well edited, well timed and fit the conventions of my genres. This is reflected in both my own evaluation as well as the audience feedback I have obtained from the protentional audience and my peers. The effects help create immersion and escapism, and also connote the documentary as being well produced and up to a professional standard. The first sound effect that can be heard is the clearing throat. I listened to the foley effect at a mixture of different pitches and speeds to see which one fit the tempo and speed of my documentary the best. I made the settings similar to how the original was as I had purposefully shuffled the paper slowly as the background diegetic music has a slow tempo too. The second foley effect I put in was paper being shuffled, arranged and flicked through. I added this close to halfway through my documentary to indicate that either historical documents or the script was being looked through. This creates further immersion for the audience as it creates connotations of them being there in the room and even as part of the production process. The fact that it resembles historical documents also elevates it again to the professional standard of production and suggests the documentary to be factual and trustworthy. I created my third sound effect the metal dropping effect to be short and sharp mimicking the form of a sting. this separates it from the rest of the diegesis and creates a sense of suspense and enigma for the audience raising questions like 'was that a deliberate effect?' This is purposeful as it is meant to connote the dangers of working in a workshop like Tony has for the majority of his life as well as emulate the crash of a motorbike. I put this effect further to the end of my documentary as it is meant to match the section of the documentary where Tony has already invented the Astralite Wheel and has put them into production.























